TIER 2 FEEDBACK

AARON WILKERSON

ELODIE JEAN

HAGAI ITZHAKI

JORGE CARRERO

MARINA ORTEGA

PETER STOKES

SEIF RAGAB

STEFANIE ODENDAHL

YIGIT ISIK

ZAIDALI RASOOL

Stefanie Odendahl – Tier 2 – February 2016

Finally – here is my post for this month...

I wanted to do something more abstract and choose to paint in acrylics – the first time after a long time.





















So I have to call it done now – I really had not much time the last month – so much work to do...

Elodie Jean Tier 2

Hi James,

Here some piece I'm working on.

Thanks for your help!

Yigit Isik - Tier 2

Hey James,
Thanks for the feedback. Here are some more character work from a live action pitch project I was working on at the school.
Thanks!
Yigit

Aaron Wilkerson - Tier 2

 

Unfinished throne room, bird motifs.

From my post-apocalyptic survival story.

Peter Stokes, Tier 2

Hi James,

I apologise for the unpolished illustrations. I'm still learning and am struggling to progress further in my pieces. Perhaps you could give me some feedback focusing mainly on composition, and also considerations for lighting, mood, and perspective.

Thanks in advance :)

Seif Ragab - Tier 2

Marina Ortega_Tier 2

Hi James,

This month was the time for the mountain and forest. I think I need to work on more compelling compositions, and I want to make sure I have an efficient focal point without losing the detail needed on other areas. I find difficult sometimes to make a focal point far away, because not being able to use contrast due to the atmospheric perspective, it's probable that something that is closer to us gets more atention. And if I blur too much part of the foreground, the paint just looks unifinished.

So maybe, my next aim would be to manage better these far focal points and get cleaner and simpler, but more compelling composition.

Looking forward to your critique :)

Zaidali Rasool- Tier 2

Hagai Itzhaki - Tier 2

Hello James, these two were done for last month's brainstorm challenge - mtg black and red environments. Looking forward to your feedback, thanks a lot!

Jorge Carrero - Tier 2

Thank you for your input! I appreciate it a lot!

WELCOME!

Hello Everyone, Welcome to the February session of Critique!!!

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